Thursday, December 8, 2011

A lonely walk


                                                                                      A
                                                                                   night
                                                                             of darkness
                                                                     and haunting silence.
                                                                A solitary soul , walks alone
                                              and chasing him , are the creepy phantom shadows.
                             The woods has come alive with the scary echoes of the nocturnal world
                 Howling wind brooms the forest floor,as the resonating crumbles of aching dry leaves 
                                        conspires with the divine serenity and mysticism
               The lost traveler,scanning the world with a thought in motion ,all unfettered!
                                       belittles the futility of the alluring materialistic world
                                                            The wet grass, all trodden.
                                                                 Reminiscent of steps,
                                                                           he took,
                                                                           a l o n e,
                                                                            lonely.

Rohit

-A Fibonacci Sonnet
-Image Source:Google Images

7 comments:

Shreya said...

Lovely lines, Rohit :) Lovely picture selection :)

P.S. I loved your new template :)

Confused Soul said...

Nice sonnet.. good job :)

~*Princesa Fiona*~ said...

Very profound and beautifully penned, Rohit! So glad you participated in this challenge and unlike myself, abandoned rhymes! I try hard to do that but they refuse to leave me :))

Your new background is hauntingly beautiful! It truly adds an alluring setting to the tone of this sonnet :)
Thanks a lot for directing me towards this one!

Ph_ said...

Amazing!
Plus I love the blog theme :)
You have a new reader now :)

magiceye said...

brilliant!

Andy said...

Hello.
I have to agree with ~*Princesa Fiona*~. The background adds a kind of mysticism to the tone of this piece. The loneliness is palpable. Imagery is awesome.
Nicely done Rohit!
Thanks for sharing & visiting. I appreciate your comment.

For ref:
My Wife, My Priceless Jewel

Rahul Bhatia said...

Nice and haunting!